tirsdag den 25. september 2012

Week 1

I am a boy from Denmark, and i am in America as a exchangestudent. And my school is in Altamont Springs, i live with boy named Jim. Everything goes very smoth in the house, and there only a shortencet dis to school.
     I like the school in Almonte Springs, it is a very big and butifull school. The school is also very clean, there is no trash lieing in the hallvays.
     The famely i live with has a pet iguana, and it often sits on my shoulder. Wen i get back to Denmark, i hope my parents will let my have a
 iguana in my room. My mom is not crazy about iguanas, but i hope my dad kan talk in to letting mee have one. Maby i will get a iguana at my birthday, or at christmas eve.

- Kristoffer

1 kommentar:

  1. Hi Kristoffer!

    Very good!Fine amount of text and very nice to have some sort of personal perspective on the cover story.

    Remember:

    - "An" in front of vowel sounds (an exchange.. an army, an iguana etc).

    - I always in CAPITAL letters!!

    - Words: shortencet, butifull, lieing, hallvays, famely, wen, kan, in to, mee, maby.

    --> Make sure to look up the words if you are not sure how to write them.

    Greetings
    Peter

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